caught me way off guard hearing parallax dreams in here! cute premise too :)
caught me way off guard hearing parallax dreams in here! cute premise too :)
Yeah man! I just popped into the audio portal real quick and saw your tune. Thought it went great with the feel and when I saw that the rights were free for web toons I was hyped to use it! Keep jammin, and I'm glad you liked the animation.
Yay Ponies!
Nice one, this really did make me laugh.
Pros: The animation is superb, voice acting stuck up pretty realisticly, all that good stuff. It was quite funny watching grown men fight over toys, which I totally don't blame them for. A mans gotta do what a mans gotta do, and thats to eat, sleep, and watch MLP; FiM.
Cons: The lack of sound effects, for one, that kick to the face should've had a good one. The music was a bit bland, and it sounded like a midi piano instead of a regular one. And lastly, HOW could he say that FLUTTERSHY isn't the cute one. I mean, have you seen the way she speaks? So adorable.
Overall: Being a brony myself, I wouldn't mind ordering merchandise from the internet, and I'm not over 25, I'm 14. Eitherway, I laughed, it was funny, good animation, good job, yay.
thanks for the critique! and yeah didnt put to much sound effect. I'm pretty bad at compiling audio but I probably should of. at first it was just gonna be like only bad music playing but then it became much more...
Very Heroic!
I gotta admit, you guys really out-did yourselves for this!
Pros: Where do I start. The Epic music, Clear animation, quality audio, superb voice acting, turning the humorous NG fad into something epic, Wow. The Lock Legion is one of those forces that will always prevail over Clocks. You just can't master this sort of patience these guys have been through. Stamper really caught me by suprise at the end.
Cons: Some of the dialouge sounded a bit off mood, not suiting the music. And when BruteBoy leaps at DarkClock, there really wasn't any emphasis or sound to make it more dramatic.
Overall: Wow guys, good job. Thats all I have to say.
Thank you for your constructive criticism. :)
Only one thing to say...
"Who the HELL are you?"... This was really good.
i love that guys voice- he's very talented
Ok..
This was actually not bad apart from the childish humour... This is something I dont see on Newgrounds very often... And since this is only your 5th animation, its not bad, but it probably wont get too far here...
Yeah, it has the dreaded "E rating" that sends most Newgrounders into the fetal position. But I really don't care, none of my planned submissions go above a Teen rating. Sex jokes are painfully overrated.
I make bass music
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Joined on 12/3/10